Re: [PATCH] Documentation: bootchooser: fix typos

[Sascha Hauer <s.hauer@pengutronix.de>]

On Wed, Nov 23, 2016 at 08:38:59AM +0100, Ulrich Ölmann wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Ulrich Ölmann <u.oelmann@pengutronix.de>
> ---
>  Documentation/user/bootchooser.rst | 57 +++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
>  1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

Applied, thanks

Sascha

> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/user/bootchooser.rst b/Documentation/user/bootchooser.rst
> index 5baa66d9b9f9..cef1d4abb090 100644
> --- a/Documentation/user/bootchooser.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/user/bootchooser.rst
> @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Additionally the remaining_attempts counter can be reset manually using the
>  :ref:`command_bootchooser` command. This allows for custom conditions under which
>  a system is marked as good.
>  In case only the booted system itself knows when it is in a good state, the
> -barebox-state tool from the dt-utils_ package can used to reset the remaining_attempts
> +barebox-state tool from the dt-utils_ package can be used to reset the remaining_attempts
>  counter from the currently running system.
>  
>  .. _dt-utils: http://git.pengutronix.de/?p=tools/dt-utils.git;a=summary
> @@ -79,8 +79,8 @@ Additionally to the target options described above, bootchooser has some general
>  options not specific to any target.
>  
>  ``global.bootchooser.disable_on_zero_attempts``
> -  Boolean flag. if 1, bootchooser disables a target (sets priority to 0) whenever the
> -  remaining attempts counter reaches 0.
> +  Boolean flag. If set to 1, bootchooser disables a target (sets priority to 0) whenever
> +  the remaining attempts counter reaches 0.
>  ``global.bootchooser.default_attempts``
>    The default number of attempts that a target shall be tried starting, used when not
>    overwritten with the target specific variable of the same name.
> @@ -89,25 +89,28 @@ options not specific to any target.
>    of the same name.
>  ``global.bootchooser.reset_attempts``
>    A space separated list of events that cause bootchooser to reset the
> -  remaining_attempts counters of each target that has a non zero priority. possible values:
> -  * empty:  counters will never be reset``
> +  remaining_attempts counters of each target that has a non zero priority. Possible values:
> +
> +  * empty: counters will never be reset``
>    * power-on: counters will be reset after power-on-reset
>    * all-zero: counters will be reset when all targets have zero remaining attempts
>  ``global.bootchooser.reset_priorities``
>    A space separated list of events that cause bootchooser to reset the priorities of
>    all targets. Possible values:
> +
>    * empty: priorities will never be reset
>    * all-zero: priorities will be reset when all targets have zero priority
>  ``global.bootchooser.retry``
> -  If 1, bootchooser retries booting until one succeeds or no more valid targets exist.
> +  If set to 1, bootchooser retries booting until one succeeds or no more valid targets
> +  exist.
>  ``global.bootchooser.state_prefix``
> -  Variable prefix when bootchooser used with state framework as backend for storing runtime
> -  data, see below.
> +  Variable prefix when bootchooser is used with the state framework as backend for storing
> +  runtime data, see below.
>  ``global.bootchooser.targets``
>    Space separated list of targets that are used. For each entry in the list a corresponding
> -  set of ``global.bootchooser.<name>``. variables must exist.
> +  set of ``global.bootchooser.<targetname>.<variablename>`` variables must exist.
>  ``global.bootchooser.last_chosen``
> -  bootchooser sets this to the target that was chosen on last boot (index)
> +  bootchooser sets this to the target that was chosen on last boot (index).
>  
>  Using the State Framework as Backend for Runtime Variable Data
>  --------------------------------------------------------------
> @@ -178,7 +181,7 @@ Settings
>  - ``global.bootchooser.disable_on_zero_attempts=0``
>  - ``global.bootchooser.retry=1``
>  - ``global.boot.default="bootchooser recovery"``
> -- Userspace marks as good
> +- Userspace marks as good.
>  
>  Deployment
>  ^^^^^^^^^^
> @@ -208,21 +211,22 @@ Settings
>  - ``global.bootchooser.disable_on_zero_attempts=0``
>  - ``global.bootchooser.retry=1``
>  - ``global.boot.default="bootchooser recovery"``
> -- Userspace marks as good
> +- Userspace marks as good.
>  
>  Deployment
>  ^^^^^^^^^^
>  
> -#. barebox or flash robot fills all slots with valid systems
> +#. barebox or flash robot fills all slots with valid systems.
>  #. barebox or flash robot marks slots as good or state contains non zero
> -   defaults for the remaining_attempts / priorities
> +   defaults for the remaining_attempts/priorities.
>  
>  Recovery
>  ^^^^^^^^
>  done by 'recovery' boot target which is booted after the bootchooser falls through due to
>  the lack of bootable targets. This target can be:
> -- A system that will be booted as recovery
> -- A barebox script that will be started
> +
> +- A system that will be booted as recovery.
> +- A barebox script that will be started.
>  
>  Scenario 3
>  ##########
> @@ -238,21 +242,22 @@ Settings
>  - ``global.bootchooser.disable_on_zero_attempts=1``
>  - ``global.bootchooser.retry=1``
>  - ``global.boot.default="bootchooser recovery"``
> -- Userspace marks as good
> +- Userspace marks as good.
>  
>  Deployment
>  ^^^^^^^^^^
>  
> -- barebox or flash robot fills all slots with valid systems
> -- barebox or flash robot marks slots as good
> +#. barebox or flash robot fills all slots with valid systems.
> +#. barebox or flash robot marks slots as good.
>  
>  Recovery
>  ^^^^^^^^
>  
>  Done by 'recovery' boot target which is booted after the bootchooser falls through
>  due to the lack of bootable targets. This target can be:
> -- A system that will be booted as recovery
> -- A barebox script that will be started
> +
> +- A system that will be booted as recovery.
> +- A barebox script that will be started.
>  
>  Updating systems
>  ----------------
> @@ -262,11 +267,11 @@ update is done under a running Linux system which can be one of the regular boot
>  slots or a dedicated recovery system. For the regular slots updating is done like:
>  
>  - Set the priority of the inactive slot to 0.
> -- Update the inactive slot
> -- Set priority of the inactive slot to a higher value than the active slot
> -- Set remaining_attempts of the inactive slot to nonzero
> -- Reboot
> -- If necessary update the now inactive, not yet updated slot the same way
> +- Update the inactive slot.
> +- Set priority of the inactive slot to a higher value than the active slot.
> +- Set remaining_attempts of the inactive slot to nonzero.
> +- Reboot.
> +- If necessary update the now inactive, not yet updated slot the same way.
>  
>  One way of updating systems is using RAUC_ which integrates well with the bootchooser
>  in barebox.
> -- 
> 2.10.2
> 
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