From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-path: Received: from metis.ext.pengutronix.de ([2001:67c:670:201:290:27ff:fe1d:cc33]) by merlin.infradead.org with esmtps (Exim 4.92.3 #3 (Red Hat Linux)) id 1kKEnz-0003A4-NW for barebox@lists.infradead.org; Mon, 21 Sep 2020 05:56:04 +0000 Date: Mon, 21 Sep 2020 07:56:02 +0200 From: Sascha Hauer Message-ID: <20200921055602.GB21278@pengutronix.de> References: <20200919145558.12274-1-avoidr@posteo.de> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20200919145558.12274-1-avoidr@posteo.de> List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: "barebox" Errors-To: barebox-bounces+u.kleine-koenig=pengutronix.de@lists.infradead.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] README: add some commas for clarity To: Robert Karszniewicz Cc: barebox@lists.infradead.org On Sat, Sep 19, 2020 at 04:55:58PM +0200, Robert Karszniewicz wrote: > Signed-off-by: Robert Karszniewicz > --- > README | 10 +++++----- > 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/README b/README Applied, thanks Sascha > index d8077d21b..0a837b2de 100644 > --- a/README > +++ b/README > @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ in board/sandbox/env: > > # ./scripts/bareboxenv -s -p 0x10000 arch/sandbox/board/env env.bin > > -To get some files to play with you can generate a cramfs image: > +To get some files to play with, you can generate a cramfs image: > # mkcramfs somedir/ cramfs.bin > > The barebox image is a normal Linux executable, so it can be started > @@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ given with '-i' will appear as /dev/fd[n]. > > If barebox finds a valid configuration sector on /dev/env0 it will > load it to /env. It then executes /env/init if it exists. If you have > -loaded the example environment barebox will show you a menu asking for > +loaded the example environment, barebox will show you a menu asking for > your settings. > > -If you have started barebox as root you will find a new tap device on your > +If you have started barebox as root, you will find a new tap device on your > host which you can configure using ifconfig. Once you configured bareboxs > -network settings accordingly you can do a ping or tftpboot. > +network settings accordingly, you can do a ping or tftpboot. > > -If you have mapped a cramfs image try mounting it with > +If you have mapped a cramfs image, try mounting it with > > # mkdir /cram > # mount /dev/fd0 cramfs /cram > -- > 2.28.0 > > > _______________________________________________ > barebox mailing list > barebox@lists.infradead.org > http://lists.infradead.org/mailman/listinfo/barebox > -- Pengutronix e.K. | | Steuerwalder Str. 21 | http://www.pengutronix.de/ | 31137 Hildesheim, Germany | Phone: +49-5121-206917-0 | Amtsgericht Hildesheim, HRA 2686 | Fax: +49-5121-206917-5555 | _______________________________________________ barebox mailing list barebox@lists.infradead.org http://lists.infradead.org/mailman/listinfo/barebox